Poorly Written Mental Health Books

Four Weeks Five PeopleThey’re more than their problems.

Obsessive-compulsive teen Clarissa wants to get better, if only so her mother will stop asking her if she’s okay.

Andrew wants to overcome his eating disorder so he can get back to his band and their dreams of becoming famous.

Film aficionado Ben would rather live in the movies than in reality.

Gorgeous and overly confident Mason thinks everyone is an idiot.

And Stella just doesn’t want to be back for her second summer of wilderness therapy.

As the five teens get to know one another and work to overcome the various disorders that have affected their lives, they find themselves forming bonds they never thought they would, discovering new truths about themselves and actually looking forward to the future.

The amount of books I’ve read where teenagers living with mental illnesses go on “recovery camps” is ridiculous. Maybe it’s because I’ve never encountered anything like this in Australia (not to say they don’t exist; I just haven’t heard of them here), or maybe it’s because the idea of going on a camp that is portrayed to “cure” teenagers by the end of a few weeks is problematic, but these books generally don’t sit well with me. However, I was excited to give this one a go because I hoped that it would be different. Spoiler alert: It didn’t. I felt like this book took on more than it could chew, writing from the points of view of five teenagers all dealing with different mental illnesses, and perhaps I would have enjoyed it more if there was more of a plot. To me, this book felt like one that simply showed the lives of these teenagers throughout four weeks, and even that wasn’t done well as it felt like it didn’t have any real direction. There was just a lot wrong with this book.

Tagline: “They’re more than just their problems.”

Let’s stop right there. This book is written from the points of view of these five teenagers, each with their own mental illness that is almost used as their “descriptor”. It’s seen as the thing that differentiates them for readers because they just lack character. Sure, one guy is in a band and another loves movies, but these “hobbies” are only used to exemplify their mental illness. Besides that, these characters are basically carbon copies of one another, complete with their indistinguishable voices. So if the book is trying to portray that a person is more than their problems, it’s not doing a very good job at it.


Apart from being so similar that it was difficult to remember which character’s point of view I was reading from, these people also lacked development. I didn’t get to see them grow as people, aside from awfully cliched realisation that “life is okay!” in the end. Such an ending is always expected in books like this one — books that think they’re being original in writing about mental illness when really, they’re just employing every trope known to readers and wiring about people who are defined by their illness. But what’s worse is that I never even got the chance to feel connected to these characters because we’re always alternating points of view, and their backstories were glossed over. It’s hard to empathise with people that all sound the same and seem to have no substance to their personality.

Teenagers Acting Rebellious

And of course, it wouldn’t be a clichéd teen mental illness novel without the characters rebelling! The fact that they drank alcohol on this camp was quite concerning, especially because there was no consideration with how their could affect them in conjunction with taking medication. It’s not that I’m opposed to teenagers drinking in novels, because some teens do drink. What I’m against is the blatant disregard that the author has in portraying healthy situations. This is an event that has no repercussions, but has the possibility to influence impressionable teenagers into thinking that it is a good idea to mix drugs and alcohol.

Everything Felt Meaningless

When I started reading this novel, I had hoped it would be one filled with meaning that wove poignant realisations about life seamlessly into the narrative. However, what I found was that much of what happened was just “filler” for the “twist”. Everything these characters did felt without purpose, and many of these “projects” they undertook didn’t even get completed by the end, and I was left wondering what the point of it all was. As the end of the book grew nearer, I realised that everything that came before was simply leading up the what happened, and then that became the central focus of the narrative. A lot of the situations just felt fake to me, and I didn’t enjoy this novel because of that.

Overall, I didn’t enjoy reading Four Weeks, Five People because of all the problematic elements it contained and because I couldn’t connect with the characters and they didn’t undergo any dramatic character development. If you’re looking for a great YA novel that talks about mental health in a raw and candid way, this isn’t the one for you. It was just a time-filler, and a poor one at that.

Trigger warning for suicide, depression, eating disorders and OCD. Please be cautious if you decide to pick up this book.


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What are some of your favourite books with great mental illness representation? Are there any books you really connect with? Have you read many books set in a kind of “recovery camp”? What do you think the most important thing to consider when writing books that contain characters living with mental illness is? I’d love to know!

Thanks to Harlequin Australia for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.


Book graphic used in header sourced from Mulpix.



18 thoughts on “Poorly Written Mental Health Books

  1. This is SUCH a great post!! Interestingly, I’ve never read a book set in a ‘recovery camp’ – what other books have you read with this? I can totally see why you’re iffy about them, though. I personally don’t like the idea that if teenagers camp for 4 weeks they’ll be totally ‘cured’. That’s just begging for misrepresentation.

    • Thank you so much! I’ve read a few over the years, but one I reread quite recently was PAPERWEIGHT by Meg Haston. I did enjoy that book, but I’m not a fan of the ‘recovery camp’ kind of a setting. But yes, there’s a lot wrong with FOUR WEEKS, FIVE PEOPLE, sadly 😕

      • I was just thinking about getting Paperweight, actually. I’ve read relatively few books concerning eating disorders – would you say that this one is a good representation?
        Ugh yeah. Well, at least you read it so I don’t have to!

      • It can be potentially triggering, as with many books relating to mental illness, but I think the author dealt with those themes really well. I have a review on it! Just use the search tool and it should pop up. But yes, don’t bother with this one! 💕

  2. I think one of the most important things to consider in books about mental illness is that you can’t cure mental illness. Reading the description of this book, it sounds like that’s what these characters expected to happen. A mental illness isn’t something to be cured like a cold or an infection. You can manage it and cope with it, but there’s no miracle cure that will make you “normal” and that’s not a bad thing. It doesn’t make real or fictional people any less.

    • Absolutely. I hate the ‘love curing mental illness’ trope with a passion. Exactly – we can learn to live with mental illness and overcome it in some cases, but it’s absurd to expect that to happen in a few weeks in a recovery camp. But yes, I wouldn’t recommend this one!

  3. I thought the cover was pretty but I read the synopsis and it just seemed a little superficial? I think I knew it wasn’t going to delve deep into the characters and your review confirmed that for me.

    Some of my favourite books that discuss mental health are: One Last Song by S K Falls, Spiral by Mila Ferrera and I liked the way it was discussed in Pushing the Limits by Katie McGarry though it wasn’t the sole focus of the novel.

    • I really like the cover too! Unfortunately, it’s VERY superficial and isn’t an accurate representation of mental illness and how people live with it. Thanks for your recommendations! I’ll check those out 💜

    • I feel you. It’s often really hard to find good mental health rep in YA! I look forward to investigating some more positive mental illness rep and adding those books to my TBR. I need to offset that 1 good : 1 bad ratio! 💕

  4. Great post! Looks like I’ll have to avoid this one but I really love that you gave some recommendations which I’ll definitely be checking out soon.

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